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Spring assessment exemplar marking

A- BAND 4-8 MARKS

WWW:

  • Use of theories
  • Clearly structured
  • Good use of media terminology


EBI:

  • More detailed analysis
  • Better explanation of theory



B- BAND 3-5 MARKS

WWW:

  • Good use of media terminology
  • Good use of theories
  • Linked theory to the context


EBI:


  • Clearer analysis 
  • Talk about why these conventions have been used


C- BAND 5-9 MARKS

WWW:

  • Clear analysis 
  • Clear description
  • Well structured


EBI:


  • Use more theories
  • Giving more specific evidence



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